jolantru: (sing to the dawn)
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Is updated with Chapter Four. HERE

Excerpt:
"Katherine was aware of the currents around her, the shifting flows and eddies. For a few breaths, she paused, perceptive of the dance and the dancers. Then, someone approached her and she neatly stepped away without missing a beat. The fog simply added to the flow, becoming part of it, dispersing when one of the students moved through it and merging back again seamlessly.

Is flying like that? She wondered, listening to her heartbeats. Knowing the flows and currents of the air? Like a bird? Or knowing who I am?"

Selected chapters only. Available as download and print.

Date: 2009-08-14 04:28 pm (UTC)
ladyqkat: (Choose your battles wisely)
From: [personal profile] ladyqkat
Finally had a chance to read, and pay attention to, all four chapters last night. your imagery still impresses me. I want to see where this is going.

Curiousity, as much as anything else, compels me to ask why you don't get together a group of like minded individuals and start your own on-line magazine similar to Bookview Cafe or
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Finally had a chance to read, and pay attention to, all four chapters last night. your imagery still impresses me. I want to see where this is going.

Curiousity, as much as anything else, compels me to ask why you don't get together a group of like minded individuals and start your own on-line magazine similar to <a href="http://www.bookviewcafe.com/">Bookview Cafe</a> or <a href="http://shadowunit.org/index.html"Shadow Unit</a>?

There are an awful lot of us niche writers out there who are either just getting started or are not very well known who might benefit from the exposure that something like that would bring. I do not know anything about the publishing field except that what I write 'does not meet anyone's needs at this time'.

Of course I am probably looking at a pipe dream.

Date: 2009-08-14 10:48 pm (UTC)
ladyqkat: Ball rebounding off wall (Rebound)
From: [personal profile] ladyqkat
Depending on what is happening with me healthwise, I don't know what I could do to help, but you can always ask if I am capable of doing such-and-so and I would either answer in the affirmative, say I'd try to learn or give you grim tales of abject failure.

Date: 2009-08-14 04:38 pm (UTC)
ladyqkat: Bubble bopping cat on nose (pwned)
From: [personal profile] ladyqkat
Let's try this again since I don't have editing capabilities here and can't do it right the first time.

Curiousity, as much as anything else, compels me to ask why you don't get together a group of like minded individuals and start your own on-line magazine similar to Bookview Cafe or Shadow Unit?

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