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jolantru ([personal profile] jolantru) wrote2009-05-29 11:42 am
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I am feeling random today.

Hitomi knelt neatly on the rush tatami, a picture of serene beauty. Her hair had been brushed into a lustrous shine, a river of black ink curling down her back. Her face was powdered white, with a dab of crimson on her lips.

It was her kimono that had attracted envious glances. Crafted by the finest Heian kimono maker, it shimmered in many colors, like the tail feathers of the peacock. Her long sleeves flared out, arranged beautifully by her maids. Beneath the rich garment were the layers of inner kimonos, subtler in shade and bringing the vividness of the peacock feather hues most startlingly.

“Oh look, a wonder in the sky!” One of the maids exclaimed, manicured hand on trembling lips. Hitomi craned her neck slightly, catching sight of something bright and flying in the spring sky.

“A Ho-Ho!” Another maid joined in the exultation. The appearance of a Ho-Ho was an auspicious omen. It was the harbinger of good news. Soon, the news arrived on running feet: the birth of the Emperor’s son.

Hitomi cringed inwardly. She did not want to be a concubine. Her father, a minor samurai, had sent her to the palace in the hope that she – and her family – would win favor with the Emperor. No. She did not want to spend her youth bearing children, year after year. She was above such drudgery.

“I want to go to the gardens,” she declared and the maids obeyed, helping her up to her feet because the kimono was heavy. Her heart, however, was light.

Once there, in the garden and surrounded by the pink cherry-blossom trees, she dismissed the maids. They went away, muttering about “that strange concubine”.

She laughed merrily and spread her arms, the peacock feather colors flashing in the sun. She would fly away, like her sister the Ho-Ho.
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[personal profile] dechant 2009-05-29 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
My heart is heavy
but your words make my burden
easier to bear.
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[personal profile] delfinnium 2009-05-29 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
:3 I like this tiny piece. All descriptive and pretty; though I'm a bit unsure about the ho-ho and the Emperor's Son thing. Surely, if the Emperor's Son is born, then she wouldn't be needed as a concubine?

*thinks* I'm not sure about the Heian period, but surely they're not so strict on the sexual behaviour of women at the time, unlike the Chinese emperors/palace behaviour.
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[personal profile] delfinnium 2009-05-29 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah - well, I was very surprised when my friend told me that Heian (i think it was) Japan really didn't care two hoots about the sexual conduct of the women, compared to the very strict conduct of the women in Imperial China (whichever dynasty). But I do like the description of the kimono, almost bird-like. Very silky.
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[personal profile] delfinnium 2009-05-29 06:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I was wondering what you were doing up! :P It's far too late for you to be up! Go to sleep!